These days are so hectic I only managed to submit these kinda stuff. Who wants this kinda slipshot stuff in their gallery anyway....
Screwed up Sakuragi (The bald guy...)'s face, Rukawa (2nd guy from right)'s posture, and gorilla's face. Meh. At least it doesn't look dirty anymore, thanks to photoshop. But....I'm hugely unsatisfied about this. Posted here because I want critiques.
Fanart once again.....(I need to be more original, SHIT, and create original art....Why the hell I can't do it???)
but i can suggest something to try out, making the inking have thick vs thin strokes, have you seen those American comic inking? yeah, like so. even if. this is japanese art. i know, but, just suggesting...
I'm not japanese, hence it's not considered japanese art. XD Even though the characters are japanese. I'm still not used with that G-pen yet, so patience....XD I'd scratch the paper and make a hole outta it with the sharp nib....
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+ great job on having the shortest to tallest, nice thinking, if its a coincidence, well, heh,. great stuff!
- but you gotta have the 1st guy (dun like saying their names, sorry) be aligned with the others. hes flying.
- no other comment.
great job!
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please give my comic some love, please.....
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I think the last two guys' transition is not smooth enough.
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It takes both rain and sunshine to make a rainbow.
Serious? Then I'll have to stick him to the ground then XD Thanks!
Ok....Maybe without the guy in the middle it'll be better. Thanks!
but i can suggest something to try out, making the inking have thick vs thin strokes, have you seen those American comic inking? yeah, like so. even if. this is japanese art. i know, but, just suggesting...
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please give my comic some love, please.....
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I'd scratch the paper and make a hole outta it with the sharp nib....
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please give my comic some love, please.....
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