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Dunking curve by ~YVS51:iconYVS51:


©2008 ~YVS51
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Submitted: March 29
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Resolution: 1000×742
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Well, not really a curve.

These days are so hectic I only managed to submit these kinda stuff. Who wants this kinda slipshot stuff in their gallery anyway....

Screwed up Sakuragi (The bald guy...)'s face, Rukawa (2nd guy from right)'s posture, and gorilla's face. Meh. At least it doesn't look dirty anymore, thanks to photoshop. But....I'm hugely unsatisfied about this. Posted here because I want critiques.

Fanart once again.....(I need to be more original, SHIT, and create original art....Why the hell I can't do it???)

Slam Dunk Characters©Takehiko Inoue
Art©YVS51 or Yenee

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~moon-send:iconmoon-send: Mar 29, 2008, 3:30:09 AM
this is a great piece, i love that you made each one a different player!

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~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 6:31:49 AM
+ the details are well done
+ great job on having the shortest to tallest, nice thinking, if its a coincidence, well, heh,. great stuff!

- but you gotta have the 1st guy (dun like saying their names, sorry) be aligned with the others. hes flying.
- no other comment.

great job!

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~Ickleronny:iconIckleronny: Mar 29, 2008, 6:40:25 AM
oi oi oi!!! No jabbing at self allowed! Something is better than nothing, right?
I think the last two guys' transition is not smooth enough.

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~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:18:44 AM
What no other comment.

Serious? Then I'll have to stick him to the ground then XD Thanks!
~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:19:50 AM
*Jabs at self*
Ok....Maybe without the guy in the middle it'll be better. Thanks! :D
~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 8:20:24 AM
Thank you! You have no idea how happy you made me XD
~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 8:47:22 AM
that means, that is all.

but i can suggest something to try out, making the inking have thick vs thin strokes, have you seen those American comic inking? yeah, like so. even if. this is japanese art. i know, but, just suggesting...

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~YVS51:iconYVS51: Mar 29, 2008, 9:00:57 AM
I'm not japanese, hence it's not considered japanese art. XD Even though the characters are japanese. I'm still not used with that G-pen yet, so patience....XD
I'd scratch the paper and make a hole outta it with the sharp nib....
~destructorv1:icondestructorv1: Mar 29, 2008, 9:42:15 AM
haha.. its ok, it takes time to master it. keep it up!

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